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How Can You Make Your Writing Sound More Persuasive? with Wharton Marketing Professor Jonah Berger

October 04, 2023 / 09:40

This episode features Jonah Berger discussing his study on how verb tense influences consumer persuasion. Key topics include the impact of active verbs, the effectiveness of present tense versus past tense, and practical applications in marketing and writing.

Jonah Berger, a marketing professor at Wharton, explains how verb tense can shape attitudes and behaviors. He emphasizes that the way we present ideas, particularly through verb choice, can significantly affect their impact.

Berger shares findings from his research, which analyzed thousands of online reviews across various categories, including books, music, and consumer electronics. The study revealed that reviews written in the present tense were perceived as more useful and persuasive.

He discusses the implications of his research for marketing, suggesting that using present tense can enhance the effectiveness of advertisements and sales pitches. Berger also highlights that while not every situation allows for present tense, many do.

In closing, Berger mentions his book, "Magic Words: What to Say to Get Your Way," which further explores the power of language in persuasion.

TL;DR

Jonah Berger discusses how verb tense affects consumer persuasion and the effectiveness of present tense in marketing and writing.

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welcome to knowledge of Wharton I'm
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Angie bassini do you remember when your
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sixth grade English teacher told you
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that it was better to write your essay
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with active verbs well she was onto
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something Warden marketing Professor
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Jonah Berger is here with us today to
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talk about his latest study on how verb
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tense can shape consumer persuasion
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which incidentally is the title of his
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paper jota welcome thanks so much for
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having me
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I wanted to quote a sentence to get us
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started from your paper and I think it's
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a great a great one quote while almost
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everything consumers do involves
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language researchers are only starting
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to examine how words Shake attitudes in
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Behavior
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so I wanted to pull the sentence out
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because I thought why did you want to
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study something as specific as verb
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tests
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you know I don't know if you've had this
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experience but we're all writers right I
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mean we may not write books or novels or
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plays but we're writing all the time
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right uh you know every day we're
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writing emails or writing PowerPoint
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presentations Word documents and a
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variety of types of content
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um and as an academic I also write
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academic papers and so one thing I
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wanted a couple years ago is well look
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some academic papers are really
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impactful others aren't uh obviously
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some of this is the ideas right some
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ideas are better and others are less
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good but could something beyond the the
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quality of the idea namely how that idea
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is presented also shape its impact right
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the way we write uh even some of that
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academic research shape shape uh its
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impact and so a couple years ago we did
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a project on this we looked at thousands
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of academic articles the number of
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citations they received and looked at
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whether writing shaped citations and we
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found that it did and we found one thing
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in particular that was a little
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surprising to me was that tense matter
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um and I hadn't even really thought
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about verb tense before so maybe I'll
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talk a little about what tense means for
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for a second you know we can talk about
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things in the past tense or the present
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tense so we can talk about the same
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thing we can say you know this book had
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a great plot or this book has a great
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plot right had being the past has been
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present
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um if someone
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um uh asks you about you know what a
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vacation that you took or something like
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that you could say well France was
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really fun or France is really fun we
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often get a choice about whether we can
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use the past or or the present tense
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um uh you know the the study found or
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the study finds uh for example um and so
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we found there that writing uh one tense
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versus the other could have an impact
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and so we started wondering well maybe
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would this generalize this is just
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something nuanced about academics and
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academic research or might you know in
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in our marketing world might the way we
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use tests have an impact like the way we
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write online reviews or sales pitches
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um or ads might whether we use the
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present tense or the past tense shape
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how persuaded Our People by our a
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message
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uh when I was reading the paper I was
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thinking about different uh ad slogans
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and changing them in my head to past
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heads and the one that popped into my
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head was what happens in Vegas stays in
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Vegas which would not work nearly as
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well if it was what happened in Vegas
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stayed in Vegas so yes so there's a
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there's a the key takeaway here is that
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a simple shift in verb tense can make
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your message more effective why how how
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does that work in the brain how is it
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just that one thing that makes a
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difference yeah so let's talk about past
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tense for a second so so if someone said
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um you know that book had a great plot
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um you know Vegas was fun
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um uh you know this product won an award
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all these things it suggests that this
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particular person for example with the
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book that they like the book when they
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read it or they enjoyed Vegas or France
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or whenever they what it was when they
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visited and because experiences are
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naturally subjective right it also
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suggests that it was their experience
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Not only was it their experience when
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they went in the past class but it was
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their personal and I experience when we
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say the present tense though we're doing
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a little bit more generalizing right
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when we say France is fun uh it says
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well not only was it fun when I went
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that particular time a few years ago not
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only did I find it fun but when I'm
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willing to say well France is fun it
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suggests well everyone would find it fun
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whenever they went right it suggests
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it's a more general idea it's in some
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sense it's an assertion right uh same
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thing you know when we say
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um the book is great the book is
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interesting it suggests not as it was
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when I read it but it is and will be uh
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in the future
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um and so when we when we use the
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present tense people go wow you're
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willing to generalize beyond your own
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personal experience in the past to
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generalize to people Beyond yourself and
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to what's more likely to happen moving
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forward well you you must be more
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certain right you must be more confident
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if you're willing to say not just that
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France was fun but it is fun not just
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this book had great plot but it has a
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great plot when you're going
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generalizing beyond the past suggest
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you're more confident or certain about
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what you're saying and as a result
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people are more likely to follow up on
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your opinion and be persuaded it makes
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the audience feel included in your
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message
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a little bit and it also makes you just
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seem more confident right if you're
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willing to go beyond your experience
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right and suggest something that others
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will experience as well people go well
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it must it must be really good you must
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be so confident about how good it is how
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right it is uh that that I'll be more
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likely to take that action how did you
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go about studying this yeah so we
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started uh as I as I often like to do in
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research with field data so in this case
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we looked at thousands of online reviews
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about books right so imagine you go to
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amazon.com think about all the reviews
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there for a given book and so we
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downloaded over a hundred thousand
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different reviews and controlling for
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all sorts of other different things
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which book it was for and why the people
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like the book or not and what topics
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they talked about we found that hey
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writing that review the more sentences
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in that review that use present tense
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the more useful people found it and that
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was interesting right we thought that
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was pretty powerful but we could say
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well maybe that's just books right books
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are something you you know you um maybe
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you consume in a certain way maybe it's
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just specific Vector books and so we
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looked at another category we looked at
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music some of you might say well books
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are only something you read once whereas
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music you consume more often maybe it
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wouldn't hold for music nope same thing
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for music so we looked at over a hundred
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thousand music reviews when reviews used
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present tense other people found it more
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useful and were more persuaded by it you
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might say well that's nice but maybe
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it's just you know enjoyable stuff like
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books and music maybe it wouldn't matter
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in other more sort of technical domains
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but we looked at Electronics Consumer
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Electronics headphones keyboards other
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sorts of things same effect there as
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well maybe it's just about products
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right maybe it wouldn't hold in Services
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right to Yelp and looked at restaurant
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reviews same thing there and so across
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all these different domains across the
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different categories writing in the
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present tense increased impact and so
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that was interesting but we said well
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maybe you can't be sure it's causal
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maybe it's just some sort of correlation
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so some experiments we took exactly the
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same thing and for some people we talked
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about in the present tense and other
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people we talked about in the past tense
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we found that even in that situation
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tight control present tense made it more
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persuasive even something like the
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results of a scientific study right so
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um this has a certain Impact versus had
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a certain impact people think a drug is
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going to be more effective in the future
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they're more interested in adopting a
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weight loss plan when you use things
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like present tense rather than past
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so this has application just sort of
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across a bunch of different domains
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marketing advertising just writing in
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general
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um it seems to me you know obviously the
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big message here is use present verbs uh
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is it that simple is that the is that
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the trick the secret sauce is there
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something else you're now telling us
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when I think about research I think the
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best research takes something that's big
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and important and shows that you can
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have an impact on it in a meaningful way
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with something that's not too difficult
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to do and so I don't mean to suggest
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that we can always talk about things in
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present tense right if someone asks you
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did you study for the test you can't say
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I am you know if you studied it's in the
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past so you can't change that because
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that is studying happened in the past
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unless you are currently studying you
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can't talk about how you uh are
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currently presently studying it if
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you're not that's it in many cases we
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have a choice right so I'm an automobile
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manufacturer for example in my car I'm
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uh was voted uh you know Car of the Year
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in a certain category well it was voted
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but it also is Car of the Year currently
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right I have a choice I can say it was
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voted car there it is car of the year I
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should probably say it is because it's
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going to be more persuasive you know I'm
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a doctor talking to a patient right uh
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rather than saying it had a 90 success
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rate saying it has a 90 success rate
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it's going to make people think it's
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more efficacious and make them more
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likely to to do it and so we can't use
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this all the time in all cases but this
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again is a situation where shuttle
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shifts in language can have a important
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impact on Behavior thank you so much I
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consider you the word master so before
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you go I do want to mention your fourth
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book it's called magic words how to what
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to say to get your way which is the
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power I think all of us would like to
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have you could download it anywhere that
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you download books Jonah thanks for
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being here with me today thanks so much
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for having me if you enjoyed this
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Episode Highlights

  • The Power of Verb Tense
    Jonah Berger discusses how verb tense can shape consumer persuasion and impact communication.
    “A simple shift in verb tense can make your message more effective.”
    @ 03m 15s
    October 04, 2023
  • Writing in Present Tense
    Research shows that using present tense in reviews increases their perceived usefulness and persuasiveness.
    “The more sentences in that review that use present tense, the more useful people found it.”
    @ 05m 55s
    October 04, 2023
  • Magic Words
    Jonah Berger's book 'Magic Words' explores how language influences behavior and persuasion.
    “You could download it anywhere that you download books.”
    @ 09m 08s
    October 04, 2023

Episode Quotes

  • We’re all writers right?
    How Can You Make Your Writing Sound More Persuasive? with Wharton Marketing Professor Jonah Berger
  • A simple shift in verb tense can make your message more effective.
    How Can You Make Your Writing Sound More Persuasive? with Wharton Marketing Professor Jonah Berger
  • It must be really good, you must be so confident about how good it is.
    How Can You Make Your Writing Sound More Persuasive? with Wharton Marketing Professor Jonah Berger

Key Moments

  • Everyday Writing00:55
  • Verb Tense Impact03:15
  • Persuasion Techniques05:17

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